Can you edit these two sentences. It reads really weird; I had to read it six or so times to figure out you're saying the heart of the chasm was Biasa Naga. It's just a personal preference on my part but will also help others who might read this later. I would either take out the second sentence in the Chasm altogether, or tweak the way the second one reads in Biasa Naga so they aren't saying the same thing. I appreciate the edit.The Chasm: The Chasm is located on the North of Keamanan. It is a deep ravine that tears through roughly eighty percent of the island carved out during a massive eruption. At the heart is where it is rumored the Unnamed Magi was the first to learn the Dragonic Transformation Spell.
Biasa Naga: Located at the heart of The Chasm. Biasa Naga is where the Unnamed Magi is said to have learned the Dragonic Transformation Spell as well as have been buried at.